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一一
27天前
短劇編劇
#靈感編劇大賽#
Inspiration Screenwriting Contest | Original Story: "I Hate Saying Goodnight"
Story Title"I Hate Saying Goodnight"
Genre (✓)□ Urban □ Historical □ School□ Mystery □ Crime Investigation□ Superpower □ Fantasy☑ Other: Small Town
One-Sentence Story IntroductionThis story is about two lovers who are forced to separate because of their families' opposition. After overcoming many challenges, the young man finally breaks tradition, proposes to the girl, gains their families' blessing, and changes the tragic ending of the original story into a happy ending.
Main Characters
Character A
Full Name: Romeo Montague
Age: Not clearly stated in the play, but generally believed to be around 16 years old.
Identity: The son of the Montague family.
Personality:
Romantic and emotional
Impulsive and often acts on his feelings
Brave and loyal to love
Dislikes violence between the families, but is often drawn into conflicts
Character B
Full Name: Juliet Capulet
Age: 13 years old (the play states that she is not yet 14).
Identity: The beloved only daughter of the Capulet family in Verona, Italy.
Personality:
Appears gentle and obedient
Strong, brave, and determined in love
Has her own opinions and is willing to fight for them
Why Did They Meet?
Romeo used small stones as a secret signal.
Juliet would go to the garden, which was their secret place.
Story Development
Beginning:Juliet stands on the balcony filled with the scent of summer, watching the dazzling lights and the beautiful ball.
Romeo walks toward Juliet through the crowd.
Turning Point:Juliet's father often tells Romeo to stay away from her.
Juliet breaks down in tears, and the two of them dream of running away together.
Ending:One night, Romeo suddenly kneels down and takes out a ring.
He says, "Marry me. I will convince your father. Go pick out a white wedding dress."
The Scene I Most Want to See
When they first met, they were both very young.
They close their eyes, and time goes back to the past.
Juliet cries and collapses onto the dew-covered steps, silently begging Romeo not to leave.
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一一： Is it the feeling of tears dripping down?
一一
22天前
HateSayingGoodnight
#靈感編劇大賽#
Season 1: Juliet's Sorrow Story
Episode 1
"Please... don't go," she whispered through her tears.
She reached out and tried to hold his hand, but he slowly pulled away.
"I'm sorry," he said softly. "I have to leave."
She collapsed to her knees, crying helplessly as she watched him disappear into the distance.
"Please... don't leave me alone..."
But he never turned back.
The night fell into silence.
Only the sound of her broken sobs remained.
She slowly closed her eyes.
When she opened them again...
Time had turned back one year.
Today was Juliet's thirteenth birthday. To celebrate, her father invited the entire family to a grand banquet.
Father: "Juliet, are you still single?"
Juliet: "Yes, Father."
Father: "Why are you still single?"
Juliet: "Because you've been busy, Father. Besides, I haven't met anyone I truly want to spend my life with."
Father: "You're already thirteen. Aren't you worried about your future marriage?"
Juliet: "No, Father. There's no need to worry. I'm only thirteen."
Father: "Do you know what people call someone who has never been in love? They call them single since birth."
His words made Juliet feel upset.
She quietly left the banquet and walked into the garden.
"Does turning thirteen really mean I'm already an older girl?" she wondered.
She felt as if everyone's attitude toward her had suddenly changed.
The voices around her seemed to repeat:
"Is Juliet still single because nobody wants her?"
Their words hurt her deeply.
But slowly, Juliet began to think...
"Maybe being single isn't so bad after all."
"Perhaps staying alone and never falling in love is perfectly fine."
Just then, she noticed a small stone lying on the ground.
Suddenly, a young man appeared in front of her.
"Remember my name," he said with a gentle smile. "I'm Romeo."
He gently wiped away Juliet's tears.
Before she could say anything, he turned around and quietly walked away.
Later, her father called her over.
Father: "Juliet, have you been secretly meeting someone?"
Juliet: "No, Father. I was only talking with the steward for a few minutes."
After her father left, Juliet hurried back to the garden.
She ran toward the dew-covered stone steps and collapsed there.
Unable to hold back her emotions any longer, she cried uncontrollably.
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一一： 沒通過靈感編劇大賽的審核
一一
19天前
HateSayingGoodnight
#靈感編劇大賽# #人生第一次#靈感編劇大賽#樹洞#
Season 1: Juliet's Sorrow Story
Episode 2
Scene: The Capulet Mansion — After the Banquet
Count Capulet:
Seal every entrance and exit! We must find the person who sneaked into the banquet! No one is allowed to leave without my permission!
Servants:
Yes, my lord!
(The servants scatter and begin searching.)
Steward:
My lady, why are you crying?
Juliet:
I don't want to be with someone like my father wants me to be.
Steward:
It seems your father has already decided on your engagement. Many people say marriage is the biggest investment of a lifetime. The cruel truth is that, for most people, it turns out to be a loss. But you don't have to agree with that.
Juliet:
I know you don't mean any harm.
Steward:
My lady, in this family, the appearance of a stranger itself is dangerous. If you saw anyone suspicious tonight, please tell your father honestly.
It is late. Please return to your room and rest. Leave everything outside to us.
(The steward bows and leaves. Juliet looks out the window, remembering the young man she met at the banquet.)
Juliet (softly):
If he is found... may heaven protect him.
Juliet's thoughts:
"Who is he? Why does he feel different from everyone else?"
"I never thought someone could make my heart beat so fast. Why did it have to be you?"
"No one knows my pain."
"I cannot betray myself."
"If no one helps me, I would rather die than go against my own heart."
(Juliet decides to leave the mansion, but her maid keeps following her. In her mind, Romeo's gentle face appears again and again.)
The goodbye I couldn't bear to say to you tonight has become an unforgettable obsession in my heart.
Maid:
You seem troubled, my lady. Are you tired from the banquet?
Juliet:
It's just... I met someone very special tonight.
Maid:
Was he one of the noble young men at the banquet?
Juliet:
I... I don't even know his name.
Maid:
Your father is searching for the person who entered the banquet. Please don't wander outside alone.
The night air is cold. Let me bring you a cloak.
You should rest now. There will be many things to handle tomorrow.
---
The next morning
Juliet's father comes to see her.
Count Capulet:
Although the man I chose for you is a little older, you shouldn't expect him to break the tradition of our family feud.
Do you think he would abandon the hatred between our families, reject the grudges passed down from the previous generation, and choose love over conflict?
That is impossible.
And don't even think about leaving the mansion.
(Juliet ignores his words and keeps walking toward the garden, waiting to see Romeo again.)
How many nights have I endured because of you?
I only remember the freezing loneliness I suffered alone.
This love has never been forgotten by time.
How I wish I could see you again... love you one more time.
I still can't forget you.
Even though we only met once, I can't stop thinking about the moment we held each other.
I hope one day this moment can happen again in my life.
Have you already gone far away?
(Juliet only cries. She refuses to eat or drink and waits in the garden all day.)
Juliet:
"I have been waiting for you. Will you come back?"
"I really miss you... Do you know that?"
"If I could have another chance, I would still wait for you."
---
Evening
(Suddenly, there is a sound coming from the bushes.)
(Juliet looks toward the bushes. Her tears stop. She waits quietly.)
(Romeo appears.)
Romeo:
"Today... can I hug you?"
Juliet:
"Why do you suddenly want a hug?"
Romeo:
"Because today was tiring... and because I missed you."
(Juliet quickly runs into Romeo's arms.)
Juliet:
"Only today?"
(Romeo slowly approaches and gently embraces her.)
Romeo:
"Whenever you want to hug me in the future, don't hold back."
Juliet:
"What if I hug you for a very long time?"
Romeo (smiling):
"Then I'll stay with you until you're ready to let go."
Juliet:
"I will never let go."
(At that moment, a group of guards surrounds them.)
(Romeo whispers to Juliet.)
Romeo:
"Help me escape."
Juliet (quietly):
"Go toward the stairs."
Guard:
"My lady? Where did the person go?"
Juliet:
"I... I just saw a cat run past. It startled me."
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一一： 是我唱得太難聽嗎？
一一
13天前
幫我刷牆,有冠名就開始寫,第4集寫搞甚麼投資,第5集被困荒島,第6集走出來,第7集像茱麗葉一樣思考,第8集當茱麗葉的實習生,第9集羅密歐怎麼樣向茱麗葉還債
第10-12集如何吵架
一一
13天前
一一
13天前
HateSayingGoodnight3
#靈感編劇大賽# # #
Season 1: Juliet's Sorrow Story
Episode 3
Today, Italy is still considered one of the wealthiest countries in the world, but this mainly refers to the economic situation of Northern Italy, which is home to many world-famous luxury brands.
Italy is currently the fifth most populous country in Europe. It has not only a highly developed industrial sector, but also remarkable tourism resources and historical heritage. It has the largest number of UNESCO World Heritage Sites among Western countries. However, behind Italy's position as the fourth-largest economy in Europe and the eighth-largest economy in the world, the economic conditions between different regions are actually quite unequal.
Romeo thought to himself:
"I have heard that the State of Chu has seven great lakes. I have only seen one of them. There are still many places I have never witnessed."
(The idea of writing "Shanglin Fu" as a gift for one's beloved is a romantic interpretation created by modern internet culture.)
Romeo led a large hunting party. The group was magnificent, displaying his dignity and power. The land was vast, with mountains, forests, rivers, lakes, and grasslands, providing a home for many wild animals.
Romeo asked his attendants:
"How can I make seven people look only at me?"
The attendant smiled.
"I have never thought about such a thing."
One of Romeo's guards quickly said:
"You already know how to make one person look only at you. Why would it be difficult to make others notice you?"
Romeo:
"I don't understand."
Guard:
"Of course you don't."
The attendant said:
"Let me show you."
Later, several rabbits suddenly appeared.
The attendant asked Romeo:
"How many rabbits do you see?"
Romeo:
"I don't feel like counting."
The attendant smiled:
"Exactly. Because you don't bother counting, you don't even know whether there are seven."
Romeo:
"I understand now."
After the hunt, Romeo enjoyed a grand feast, watched singing and dancing performances, and celebrated with great pleasure.
Romeo's mother said to him:
"You are old enough now. You should start thinking about your future."
Romeo replied:
"With everything we already have, would you really let someone else take it away? Who would give up a life this comfortable?"
Yet Romeo's thoughts returned to Juliet.
He only wanted to see her again that night, to hold her in his arms a few more times.
When Romeo and Juliet met again, Romeo slowly approached her. He looked into her eyes first, waiting for her silent permission. Then he opened his arms.
Juliet smiled and stepped forward, gently embracing him.
They held each other quietly, saying nothing, only feeling each other's heartbeat.
Romeo said:
"I only want you. Why would I want anyone else?"
Juliet asked:
"Do you truly have only me in your heart?"
Romeo replied:
"How can I prove that you are the only one I want?"
Juliet said:
"No one can truly know such a thing. As long as I accept you..."
Romeo interrupted:
"No. That is not the kind of love I believe in."
Juliet said:
"Then let me teach you. When you see me, just run toward me. From now on, you can do whatever you truly want."
Romeo said:
"I wish every woman in the world could be you."
Juliet replied:
"But there are still shadows of others in your heart. That is normal."
Romeo asked:
"What about you?"
Juliet answered:
"I don't know."
Romeo became upset and left.
Juliet thought:
"Who are the people he truly loves? I know nothing about his world."
"Will he still come to see me?"
"Should I continue waiting for him in the garden every day?"
"But he always comes to see me..."
"He will come again next time."
Juliet wondered:
"What should I give him?"
"He already has everything. What could I possibly give him?"
Then she thought:
"I will give him the flowers I planted myself... and a letter."
Juliet wrote:
"I cannot give you my name, nor can I change the hatred between our families... but I can give you this."
"Please treasure it, because it carries a part of my heart."
Romeo replied:
"Then I will treasure it as I treasure you."
一一
18天前
第一次接吻是什么样的感觉？
我希望親暱的行為都不要發生,例如：牽手,可能我有潔癖吧,牽手要反手等待牽手的那一刻,才叫做尊重,也很期待正手,要抱進懷裡的感覺,至於要靠近了,會計較更多,例如：味道,清潔度,整潔度,聲音外表都是考慮的重點,所以要學學一些技術。
靠近了是要先擁抱還是撫摸,可能是摸一下手還是頭髮吧,可是不要太快速擁抱,怎麼決定要擁抱還是親吻,親吻是擁抱的前兆,就算是簡單的輕吻,也不能隨便,如果是隨便的人,一定常常遇到不喜歡發生的事。
第一次永遠不要發生的事,其實是一些事情要發生時,要有勇氣去拒絕,要有理性觀察,要做真心的決定,客氣對待對方。
如果真的發生了不喜歡的事情,雖然沒辦法接受,可是脾氣不能太拗,要學會怎麼釋懷,就像是偶爾要端一壺熱茶,就要釋懷,不要一下就把它弄倒了,一次二次三次,做的不好,常常會出毛病。
#人生第一次# # #
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AVA77🌟： 😂哥你是纯爱
一一
20天前
第一次和喜欢的人约会你们去做了什么？
#人生第一次#
第一次和喜歡的人約會，常見的經歷包括：1.一起吃飯2.一起散步3.看電影4.一起逛街5.拍照留念6.聊彼此的故事7.送對方回家
「適不適合」，更值得思考的是：我們相處時彼此是否尊重？遇到問題能不能溝通？是否願意一起成長？
是否讓彼此感到安心和快樂？真正決定一段關係是否適合的，而是兩個人長期相處後的行動、信任與努力。
若是深愛,深愛彼此,不一定有對的答案,有人轟轟烈烈,有人浪漫甜蜜美,有人平靜如水,有人淡水之交,深愛才有更多答案。
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一只鱼： 冥王星
一一
20天前
短劇編劇：幾句晚月
#靈感編劇大賽# # #
前序
我靈感原編自關山點酒,千秋皆入喉,更有沸雪酌與風雲某。
才提到,有柳葉飄過那小橋你抬眼笑,我在燈下把眉挑,只等你把話聊,只與你共今朝,你的溫柔為我傾倒,星河遙遙情絲繞,我將月色邀,不問人間多喧鬧,只為你折腰,等花落花落在眉稍,等風等你心尖跳,聽那裊裊琴聲繞,等你牽我衣角,等你神仙貪花草,這人間唯我是你歸巢,循著我步調,此生唯情不老,藏眼神藏不住心跳,風月也飄搖,共度良宵,此意才逍遙。
一句话：怎麼你留下最真實的回憶,都是提醒我失去的聲音。
我真的真的不想要離開,
你是千里故人,青山應白首,年少猶借銀槍逞風流,
幾載風雪卷刃,朔風同孤晝,瞧得亂世一般嶙峋瘦,
塞外硝煙未斷黃雲遍地愁,僥倖紅梅久不曾下枝頭,潦草作運籌,踏過飛沙,春風上重樓,你曾十街任斗酒,倘若魂斷沙場,不見失地收,誰共誰不朽？
自由的路上,阻擋了想要的逃亡,獨處的時光,取代了想搜集的擁抱,不再殷切需要,你離開的反作用力,有太多的理智。
晚夕設定了A白月倔強的表情,就這樣想觸摸晚夕的臉龐,不再體貼退讓,不再交換悲傷,太自以為把晚夕鎖進黑暗陷阱,而晚夕卻不心慌,白月留下的步伐,是孤單的方向嗎？就算是沒有未來的形狀。
B晚夕說著“喔！就這樣吧,我的愛,讓你佔據我”,不應該忍耐,晚夕只剩無奈,白月忘記之後又變壞,永遠說完不理睬,習慣許諾晚夕不切實際的未來,一瞞再瞞的傷害,要對晚夕坦白,說白月決心要悔改,晚夕已決定離開,想說要選擇原諒嗎？要讓白月繼續裝堅強嗎？白月說“我想這次我會先投降”,晚夕
識破白月的偽裝,好過困住受傷,輸的愛不如散場。
為什麼會遇見？愛情到底有什麼樣的問題,懷念相遇,靠近了想逃離,分開了又想重新把妳狠狠抱緊,如果可以摒棄前嫌忘掉,從前那些陰影。
我走馬路過,看倦塵世幾何,從此為你停格,人間四月,花開花謝了花滿天,都不如你眉眼,你笑得多無邪,風偷撥我心弦。
雨天我在你懷裡,不要剩我一人在雨中哭泣,難道讓我跪下求你,怎麼才回心轉意,不要只給我留下心痛,我為你搖搖欲墬,落淚有幾回,你眼中風月,我找不著北,為你幾次失眠,而我卻自醉。
怎麼開始的？我為你著迷,又深知你危險,怕你有天會不管,放逐我在天邊,留我在回憶的圍城哭喊,無法逃離你精心編織的謊言,也好過最後輸的狼狽不堪,這場愛沒誰有權利,一直都給另一方虧欠。
應該不能離開的情節,發展出的釋懷：輸的愛,寵壞無法倒帶,能不能忘記說拜拜,這算什麼崩壞的誓言,我不想再想起來,請鬆開我的手,讓我消失在茫茫人海,讓我回不來吧,此刻戒掉依賴,抵賴是什麼呢？“想挽住晚夕的手,哀求不要走”,這樣是否妳就會停留,不還妳自由,可是為何悲傷無法停留在晚夕的胸口,輸的愛,只剩淘汰。
結局我想你會卑躬屈膝求我,回你懷裡,分開的時間想了很多很多,哭的撕心裂肺歇斯底里,為何你沒同樣深陷溫柔的漩渦,如果可以,這次不想放棄,縫補好我破碎的心。
我最想看到的一幕,無非幾句春色,和你有纏綿,有交心的夜晚,卻為你亂了平仄。
一一： 我唱得不好聽嗎
一一
21天前
有没有一个人让你第一次懂了什么是遗憾？
我大學畢業那年,在T吧認識P,只有半年,給了她一萬,她也不還我,我好遺憾我當初學不會跟人家要錢,她說如果是她,她會報警,心裡想著,她當初可能很會收錢吧,我覺得我想要看到我愛的人們,大家是不是遇到喜歡欣賞的對象,就會努力和她相處,我覺得從誰身上只要得到一些,就是不會再繼續努力,就會無關緊要,這是很正常的,不會與人相處,不會拿捏,總是被拋在腦後,也不會學到什麼是要求,我覺得要求是一門技術活,這是一種生活態度,每天日常普通的東西,而不是讓人們會感到壓力去做的事,但妳要啟發別人去做像是,不只是成為好的藝術家,把那幅畫價錢抬的這麼高,而是我模仿的東西比別人好,大家只來看我,大家會一起討論的東西會比價格高的藝術品重要嗎？大家可以試試看,怎麼 選擇哪條路走,不管哪一條路,都很難被讚揚,因為讚揚一個人是苦差事,比如說,公園裡的作品,如果要有人按讚,還是讓人收藏,哪一種比較簡單,還是評論比較簡單,分享算簡單嗎,瀏覽率高,為什麼偏偏不會被按讚,值得一提的是,讓人按讚評論或收藏,到底怎麼做,要怎麼達到可以多方跟人互動分享。
#靈感編劇大賽# # #
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一一： 二恨海棠無香[รูปภาพ]
